Story Of O Series What O U Think Of This Story.its The Synops Of The First Book Of My Fantasy Series ..would It Be Succesful

What o u think of this story.its the synops of the first book of my fantasy series ..would it be succesful - story of o series

that of a boy named Noor .. Which a mathematical genius after the mysterious murder of his father, his mother, Noor Bank Director, Zidan, Noor is married to an orphanage during his honeymoon with Zidan .. which will last for 3 months. . Noor orphanage but terrible secrets .... everyone in this orphanage is accustomed to magical creatures that go around ..... Equations of magical mystery open doors to .. but no one is better on the math part Noor, once you get to learn the magic of mathematics to Sarah ... and begins to dominate the equations of magic .. .. shows the terrible truth that the soul is a thief (ghodnofer) for centuries in a secret room was added in an orphanage, and now their allies in the orphanage in search of sneaking his master ... But another proProblem remains unsolved equation ghodnofer .. Soul .. (who uses magic to a mathematical equation that can control the characteristics and the current state of your soul .. change the magic formula of consciousness and falls into a coma without losing end ...), the only one who can again - Edit the magic formula ghodnofer awake a natural mathematical wizards Noor (math magician is a person who does not necessarily write a magnifying glass to mathematical equations in talent .... its magic only to the configuration file equation on paper or otherwise) .. ghodnofer now is to convince allies to help them find Noor ghodnofer equation in the orphanage and teacher wakes up .. Theor Noor help, but ..... when he learns the true intentions ghodnofer
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